THE PERFECT PAIR shall rise!

Game frequently crashes on linux atm! Can't even make it through one dungeon without it hanging up. Music continues playing but the game is totally unresponsive with the whole screen frozen as is. Any way I can find an error report or smthn to let you know what's wrong? Otherwise! Love it so far! Really great concept and I can't wait to play more :3

Has the game been updated?

Looking good, really promising start! Looking forward to future updates.

As for suggestions, I can think of a couple:

1. More sound effects is a must, I think they'd add a lot.

When the log says 'Aster follows closely' (or whatever it says), that implies there's a chance for her and Mentor to lag behind a room. So maybe have a chance for the two to disappear from the animations and just have the player hear them while the hero fights by himself? And then you can either go looking for them or wait for them to catch up?

2. The selling point of the game is the interactions with the light levels so I think you should lean into that as much as possible (e.g. random events that affect the light level, or that only occur at certain light levels (beyond just different animations, although that's a part of it).

Maybe try and implement an in-game reason to have lower light levels rather than just that you can't afford torches. Something like you can find more loot if it's darker? Then you can have Aster and the Hero discuss this with the Mentor, who encourages them to explore in the dark (for his own reasons too of course).

I'm thinking Darkest Dungeon kind of things, if you've played that. You could also maybe have some kind of stress meter or hallucination effects for the hero (some of which might not be hallucinations), but that might be a bit much.

I'm not sure how technically feasible it is, but I'd love to have unique animations for when the light level is increased during a scene. e.g. Aster suddenly realising you can see her and quickly adjusting her clothes while blushing.

Anyway, those might be ideas for the far future. I'd focus on just getting the main mechanics streamlined and some more content in for now, but it's looking good so far!

I love this game, thank you for creating it.

Please continue and can we pay via itch.io?

Ok, I'll tell you straight, you need to check these files carefully because again it's showing up as a virus and this time even Google's security system showed it as ransomware.

I'm a bit confused, what exactly do I do? Every time I win, Aster just goes to sleep and the only thing I can do is go back in the dungeon.

Since F95 Thread for this game can get swamped, i would like to give my thoughts and suggestions here, if you do not mind, @prostochel2002.

I do not want this to turn into another Corruption nonsense, or as i call it, "Excuse to NTR Genre". Just make the girls naturally just cheat, without all the Corruption part. And do not make it avoidable. Just make it unavoidable, a part of the whole experience, but hidden/secret from the MP (Male Protagonist). Being oblivious, too trusting and what have you.

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Mentor's Identity/Gender: Whether you want to give us the choice or what you want. Regarding Mentor's identity. Like Mentor knows Mystic Magic, but also several other Jobs. Mentor is obviously very big in all the areas and powerful. Ugly Bastard fatso who is a Mystic Mage, Elementalist and Dark Magician (form of banned Mage, except Mentor was allowed, due to the sheer Fame) or go the extremely rare case of a towering Dickgirl instead, being muscular due to being a Mystic Warrior, Sage and Demonoligist. Just a few ideas.

All the Characters in your party will support you, including the Mentor. The Mentor is both your and your girlfriends Mentor, but an asshole. Have not taught you useless stuff, however. They will support you much less when they are doing their "Activities", but in order to keep the MP from finding out, helps the MP.

The Content is centered around the Mentor, and your GF, and perhaps some Side-Character Girls. Or any Female Characters who your MP have a very close relationship with.

You have a Level-Up System and Skill System. MP start off like level 10 already, thanks to the Mentor teaching MP, and unique Skills tailored to MP and GF that the Mentor taught you. Lvl 10 in this world is considered pretty high, not that it is the highest, but based on average Levels, final being lvl 100. Which is your goal.

Equipment worsens after each Delve, success or failure. Another goal is to find Equipment that does not need to be repaired, sold or abandoned. Forcing you to deal with the fact Delves corrodes your Equipment. With the exception of Non-Metal objects. Taking and using Equipment not made of Metal works, but will never replace or work better than Metal-based Equipment. In case you ever run out of money or other reasons why you cannot use Metal Equipment, falling to Wood or something else, is a good backup plan. Something the Mentor also taught the pair.

The Use of Torches should be carefully used. Planning is essential. If you, the MP, notices the Room looking suspicious in any manner, using the Torch can reveal perhaps a Chest or something else. There are Risks and there can be Rewards. You see much less without it, but you can make out shapes in the fog in the Delve you move in. Your Characters never act outside of their Group, so they do not lose sight and contact with each others. Exactly the reason why no one should ever separate from relatively close proximity to each other. At least bare minimum within whisper distance. Not that it helps to hear behind you when you are the frontline Character...



These are some immediate suggestions and ideas. Let me know what you think. Take care!

Love the game and can't wait to see it get updates. I wish I could support but unfortunatley boosty has issues accepting my card :(

trying to install the new version but it keeps saying it's a virus

The game is fun and I like the concept of a first person dungeon crawler that also has NTR elements. As a person who has played a lot of NTR games, I really like the combination as it is really unique.

I really loved the fact that once the torch died down long enough the animations with change for Aster and the Mentor. It’s something unique that I have not seen any other game use.

I think there are things that could be worked on. Including introducing Aster. And the mentor. I had no idea who he was because he had not been introduced until I had been in the dungeon, and the torch had gone down. Maybe have him do some thing in combat as well. I thought combat was actually kind of hard because I kept losing at the boss until I randomly won. Although these type of first person, dungeon, crawl in games, rely heavily on RNG.

Apart from those things, I really enjoyed this game. I am looking forward to the next update.

Seriously, you should keep working on this game because the idea is good

Tag this with NTR and/or Netorare. I had no idea this had such content, fore i looked up the description.

A lot of Games and things these days do not use correct Tags. As a consequence, they are found by luck and their content may just confuse people, when accurate Tags is lacking.

I will look this up again once it has at least one major update.

Take care and good luck with your Project here.